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"Excited" sentence in "accidents"
[edit]I apologise for the inconvenience I have caused through this [1] edit. I still have my doubts regarding the clarity of this sentence in its current form; "excited" is an adjective and it appears that it is being used as a verb. Would it be acceptable to change the sentence to read "At 9:52 a.m. on July 27, 1939, about 500 workers of a nearby Nippon Kōgaku factory, excited to see their colleague off, entered the track near the station." ? JTST4RS (talk) 10:43, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- I've taken the liberty of rewording the whole paragraph. I don't think it is particularly necessary to mention how "excited" the people were. --DAJF (talk) 10:06, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
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