Talk:TimeClock Plus
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Suggestions for improvement
[edit]Some quick thoughts on how the article can be improved.
- It needs a proper lead section (important, but probably should be written last)
- It has too many graphics (including the features table) that break up the flow of the text
- All those quotes should be converted to narrative text
- The sections should be more logical: perhaps History, Features, Reception
- History could contain the content in the present History and Versions
- Features could include the present Applications and much of Reception
- Reception could include details of where it's used and any independent reviews etc (if they can be found)
—SMALLJIM 16:11, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
- Update: I've done the above. —SMALLJIM 16:50, 25 November 2011 (UTC)