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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:01, 6 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will go for this just after your previous effort passed! --K. Peake 09:01, 6 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "while produced by Tiësto and" → "while produced by the DJ and" to avoid overusage of his name
  • "as well as the vocal delivery of the singer." → "and the vocal delivery of Max."
  • "and reached the top five on rankings" either mention the number of countries it reached the top five or top 10 in, then add ones these included
  • For both gold and platinum certifications, add the number of countries each were in and list a few examples
  • "and the UK" → "and the United Kingdom"
  • "and the US." → "and the United States."
  • "for "The Motto" premiered" → "for the song premiered"

Background and composition

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  • "Few days prior to" → "A few days prior to"
  • "depth to ['the song']," while" → "depth to ['the song']", while"
  • ""The Motto" is a" → "Musically, "The Motto" is a"
  • Why is [7] at the end of the above sentence when it offers no mention of eurodance?

Critical reception

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  • "widely received critical acclaim" → "was met with widespread critical acclaim"
  • BroadwayWorld should not be italicised
  • "and the party begins again."" → "and the party begins again!"" per the source
  • "signature dance soundscape."" → "signature dance soundscape"." per MOS:QUOTE; fix the repeated occurrences of these issues throughout
  • Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised

Commercial performance

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  • "as Tiësto's sixth and" → "standing as Tiësto's sixth and"
  • Mention the Dance/Mix Show Airplay chart since you have written that in the lead
  • "more than 1,000,000 copies" → "more than 1,000,000 equivalent copies" because that is what the certification actually is
  • "the song reached number 6" → "the song reached number 6 on"
  • Remove pipe on Canada Hot AC, as that is the same sub-section the previous term leads to
  • "from Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)" → "from the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)"
  • "and number 6 in on" → "and number 6 on" also, I would recommend moving the United Kingdom to being after its singles chart so the sentence doesn't imply Ireland is part of the country
  • "from British Phonographic Industry (BPI)" → "from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI)"
  • Wouldn't it be better to use the plural for the certifications?

Music video

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  • Img looks good!
  • "leaving out a hotel party" are you sure this is correct grammatically?
  • "and causing all the guests to" → "and this causes all the guests to"
  • "as a nod to the" → "a reference to the"

Track listing

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Why is Czech Republic radio chart included too when the single one is there?

Monthly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Format → Format(s)
  • Label → Label(s)

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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