Talk:Scott Bolton (American football)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 04:08, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 17:46, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 18:14, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:14, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

You don't need to spell out NFL after the first time in the lead.
to the varsity and running one time for eight yards. --> to the varsity team, where he rushed one time for eight yards.
He appeared in two further games for the 1988 Packers, recording no further statistics. - delete the "recording..." part, as you have repeated that phrase enough that it is implied if you don't provide any stats.
Ref spot check:
- Websites should have access dates (Ref 1, 2, 12, 14, 15, 16, 19, 25)
- The Waukesha Freeman should be linked in Ref 29
- All refs appear in good order otherwise. My only recommendation would be to add Ref 1 to the sentence marking the end of his professional career to support this comment that he didn't go on to play professionally again.

Nice work BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 00:32, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:01, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 04:07, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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