Talk:Richard Stevens (RAF officer)/GA1
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Nominator: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 09:02, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:02, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- Spot checks made
- Clarify that he married Mabel in 1936 and that his two children were a son and a daughter, the latter of which died in a house fire. Maybe even give their names.
- Have done this, on first introduction and in the final paragraph. Zawed (talk) 10:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Saunders says that it was a burst eardrum from his first night of combat that grounded him in early 1941, not an ear infection.
- Revised on this point. Zawed (talk) 10:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for the feedback on this one, I have revised accordingly so the article is ready for another look now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC)