Talk:Pine (gamer)

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1. This article is a very good start because Lily has already covered a variety of topics that are specific to her topic and are relevant. She is making her own article from scratch and is doing a good job of formatting it the same as other articles with the bio section and multiple other sections for her topic. I really liked the bio section she did for her person because it looks professional and well put together. I also liked how she linked different terms as she wrote because it also adds to the credibility of the article as a whole.

2. I would suggest for her to look over some of her work because there are minor grammar mistakes but just to keep adding information so each section has a good amount of information. She can also add more specific information relating to some facts such as name the specific culinary arts university that Pine attended instead of just saying that general term. These would be good for improvements because it will enhance the article and help people who do not know that much about the content to still be able to understand the information.

3. I think the aspects that I could apply to my own article include the specific topic headers that she made and being able to link specific terms that she referenced in her article to other topics in Wikipedia. There are topics that I could explore by making my own subcategories and I think she utilized that really well. She also did a good job of hyperlinking terms which helps when people don't know that much about the topic be able to research and learn more.

Olshoema (talk) 19:01, 6 March 2020 (UTC)olshoema