Talk:Phoenix, Arizona/GA2

GA Reassessment

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Starts GA Reassessment. The reassessment will follow the same sections of the Article. Thank you --

Instructions: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 04:31, 7 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Observations

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

Infobox gives a population as at 2014. Have there been any more recent US census since 2014?
Links to state routes in Infobox noted;
Reference 19 does not mention the Hohokam people. It is the old City of Phoenix website. Is this reference really relevant here?
Where is this (A town that had just over 65,000 residents in 1940 became America's sixth largest city by 2010, with a population of nearly 1.5 million, and millions more in nearby suburbs.) resourced from?
Reference 172 requires subscription.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):

Founding and incorporation is well written and well referenced;
1960s to present doesn't quite present the migration issues raised in this reference.
^{[citation needed]} about ozone formation (Climate section)
^{[citation needed]} about particulate pollution
interesting comment about dew point being at 21 °C
This is a 2016-2017 issue: The Phoenix area hosts two annual college football bowl games: the Fiesta Bowl, played at State Farm Stadium,[248] and the Cheez-It Bowl, held at Sun Devil Stadium (though Chase Field has substituted as host while ASU's football stadium undergoes renovations) (needs updating)
Bolles was the only reporter from a major U.S. newspaper to be murdered on U.S. soil due to his coverage of a story (283) Does this claim hold valid today?
Are the statistics about car theft valid today?
The statistics about Phoenix Union High School District are dated 2016. Are these valid?
Arizona State University: what is the current enrollment? Is it still one of the largest public universities in the U.S.???
The Healthcare status report is dated 2011. The figures given in the article are somewhat at variance from the retirement migration noted in the reference linked above. Is there a more recent health status report for Phoenix and the Phoenix Metropolitan Statistical Area (MSA) (officially known as the Phoenix-Mesa-Chandler MSA ?
2010 (the last year for nationally reported figures) → is this correct? → is this valid?
The population statistics seem to be at 2010, or 2012, depending on which table you look at.

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:

Yes, NPOV is presented in this article.

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

Page created 15 April 2002;
Page has 7,780 edits from 3,190 editors;
ClueBot NG has been on the page 45 times, indicating significant vandalism of this page;
Internet Archive Bot has been on the page indicating significant updates of references has occurred;
Majority of edits occurred in 2007, 2014;
90 day page views = 304,346 with a daily average of 3,344 views;
Page listed as GA on March 27, 2016
Page is a Vital Article, level 4

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Notifying Editors:

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Overall:

In general, this is a well presented article but I am uncomfortable about the figures in the Infobox and the Demographics section; ditto the population section and the Healthcare sections. It seems that this article has not been comprehensively updated to reflect current numbers in Phoenix circa 2020, and related issues (education, etc). Looking at the Phoenix Herald this evening reflects quite the city. There are a few questions raised herein which merit attention.

On hold --Whiteguru (talk) 10:35, 1 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 04:31, 7 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]