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edit request

Hello Spintendo,

I am simply proposing that an introduction to the biography section include new wording. In summary, I have included edit requests with annotations for editors to approve. This is related to the desired additions. For this particular stage, kindly refer to incorporated facts with situations I have included.

Thank you for your support!

Cordially yours, 148.77.75.34 (talk) 23:36, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

Dear Mr. Lane, Thanks for your electronic message. This is precise and helpful. Also, I appreciate your providing the supportive links. They definitely make analytical updates to the material considerably more accessible. That said, I am attentive using information from this composing. One sample is displayed with respect to the article “Talk” page. In specific terms, the "edit" tab is not open. For example, please go to: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Paul_Coleman_(sailor).

Do you know if I need to submit an application (or apply for distinct approval) to contribute to the Wikipedia volunteer editors on this "edit" tab? 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:58, 28 February 2018 (UTC) Cheers! Cordially yours, Paul

edit request

Dear Fellow Wikipedia Contributors,

I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my research colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner.

If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration!

Cheers -


Some time ago, this was in the article with references.

| nationality =  United States of America | height = 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m) | weight = 163 lb (74 kg)

After COI purge this was deleted. An interested Wikipedia reader might like to view this with the corresponding image. I believe this detail, with this image (caption included) would add to the article. The other sailboats could be cropped out if the editors deemed them irrelevant. Please note, We are missing a big piece of history in the fact that sailing vessels today travel rather briskly through the water. If fellow editors see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to reinstate these details with the matching image. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move this new material to the live article. P.S. There is also a reference I can e-mail. Scanned copies are available to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. My principal objective is to provide more source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing. I tried to uphold an impartial point of view by using only certifiable, published sources. 148.77.75.34 (talk) 22:24, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Dear Spintendo,

I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner.

If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! Cheers -

Replace Line 45 to read as follows: 

==See also==

US Sailing[1] Replace Line 13 to read as follows: 

| fullname       = 
| nickname       = 
| nationality    = United States [2]

Paulcoleman (talk) 23:03, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ ISAF: Member National Authorities.
  2. ^ Sarah Starkweather. "US immigration legislation online". University of Washington, Bothell Library. Retrieved January 1, 2012.

Reply

The reference does not directly support the assertion, a claim which is—nevertheless—not in dispute. The claim stays while the reference is declined.
Spintendo      23:23, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

1. please replace this version:

| classes = Soling, Etchells, J/24 [1]


2. with this version:

| classes = Soling, Etchells, J/24[2], 470 (dinghy) [3] Paulcoleman (talk) 23:23, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ O'Mahoney, John B. (25 September 1983). "A Homecoming for Etchells". The New York Times. Until last year, they competed in many world-class events - in the J-24, Soling and Etchells classes.
  2. ^ O'Mahoney, John B. (25 September 1983). "A Homecoming for Etchells". The New York Times. Until last year, they competed in many world-class events - in the J-24, Soling and Etchells classes.
  3. ^ O'Mahoney, John B. (25 September 1983). "A Homecoming for Etchells". The New York Times. Until last year, they competed in many world-class events - in the J-24, Soling and Etchells classes.

Reply

no d The reference does not state 470. That is why I removed it. Spintendo      23:31, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Dear Mr. Alex,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. Also, thank you for providing the helpful suggestions. These recommendations are positively helpful in pinpointing accurate material with encyclopedic reliance. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. In this regard, please let me know what I can do to help.

Kindly note, I'm vigilant with employing information in support of the Wikipedia mission. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. One example is shown with respect to the article “Talk” page. In precise terms (for example), please see: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Paul_Coleman_(sailor).

Thank you for your valued consideration! During the interim, do you know if I need to apply (or get special permission) to participate in this "edit" tab? Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Feel free to contact us directly should you have any questions. We are always happy to discuss further.

Have a nice day! Cheers!

Sincerely yours,

Paul 148.77.75.34 (talk) 20:39, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just improved article. Please take a minute for an appraisal my edit. If you have any requests for more source references, or new additions, please visit citations for supplementary material.

Cheers!

148.77.75.34 (talk) 20:48, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. Also, thank you for providing the helpful suggestions. These recommendations are positively helpful in pinpointing accurate material with encyclopedic reliance. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. In this regard, please let me know what I can do to help.

Kindly note, I'm vigilant with employing information in support of the Wikipedia mission. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have suggestions that may be added to the article as the editor deems appropriate in manner to improve the article. Please take a minute for an appraisal my edit suggestions. If you have any requests for more source references, or new additions, please visit citations for supplementary material. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! During the interim, do you know if I need to apply (or get special permission) to participate in this "edit" tab? Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Feel free to contact us directly should you have any questions. We are always happy to make available supplementary open source citations.

Have a nice day! Cheers! Paulcoleman (talk) 21:18, 16 May 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Dear Fellow Wikipedia Contributors,

Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. If there are areas where editors think I can improve. An interested Wikipedia reader might like to view this with the corresponding image. Please let me know if you can assist with this. I have just one modest edit application. It's about the last requested addition of reliable encyclopedic relevance. This time I added the image. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. Please take a moment to review. Hopefully the image experts are happy with it. File:TeamColeman1.jpg

I believe this detail, with this image (caption included) would add to the article. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. The other sailboats could be cropped out if the editors deemed them irrelevant. I'm requesting that, when you have finished reviewing the changes, you may to add references as appropriate. Please note, we are missing a big piece of history in the fact that sailing vessels today travel rather briskly through the water.

  • I made the following changes. Please take a moment to review. If you have any questions, please visit the referenced links for additional information. I made the following changes:
  • I'm requesting that, when you have finished reviewing the changes, I am asking (respectfully) that my Fellow Wikipedia Contributors to please take a moment to review the image and hopefully the image experts are happy with it.

From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, Essentially, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. If fellow editors see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to reinstate these details with the matching image. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move this new material to the live article.

Thank you for your valued consideration, and for all of your help! If you have any questions, please visit the links for additional information.

Cheers –

P.S. There is also a reference I can e-mail. Scanned copies are available to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. My principal objective is to provide more source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing. I tried to uphold an impartial point of view by using only certifiable, published sources. 148.77.75.34 (talk) 16:31, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

It is not clear where you intend for this image to appear. As it is, with the suggested caption, it has no context. ~Anachronist (talk) 20:49, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
The COI editor has asked to add this picture before, and was told during those requests that, like Anachronist just said, there was no context provided in the picture. The best ones to use would be pictures where either the article's subject appears by himself or while on a sailboat, but not pictures of sailboats by themselves.  spintendo  21:24, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

{{edit COI}}

Dear Esteemed Wikipedia Contributors,

I have simply one minor edit request. If there are areas where editors think I can improve the context provided in the picture please let me know. A discerning Wikipedia supporter might like to opine on this resultant image. The finest ones to use could be images the editorial's topic as it appears, or on a sailboat. I am excited to work with the community, and most very flexible on collaboration to contribute to Wikipedia.

From this point of view, succeeding with the managing philosophies delineated for the appropriate measures in assessing contributing new source material, ultimately, I have attached the "edit request" that may be supplementary to the article as the editor considers the suitable in manner. In light of that, and in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help this phase to add the shoot. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest. Accordingly, I have faith in this detail, that with this image (caption included) it will add nicely to the article.

Please take a minute to evaluate, and kindly let me know if you can contribute with this appeal for the addition of trustworthy comprehensive purpose. All being well, if our fellow editors journalistic specialists are pleased with it, and see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to improve the details with the matching image. File:TeamColeman1.jpg . I'm requesting that, when you have finished reviewing the changes, you may add references as appropriate. Preferably, I’d like somebody to review what I’m suggesting, provide reflection, and, once the current is in good shape, move this new material to the live article.

Thank you for your valued consideration, and for all of your help!

Cheers –

148.77.75.34 (talk) 16:45, 28 June 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

{{edit COI}}

Dear Esteemed Wikipedia Contributors,

I have simply one minor edit request. If there are areas where editors think I can improve the context provided in the picture please let me know. A discerning Wikipedia supporter might like to opine on this resultant image. The finest ones to use could be images the editorial's topic as it appears, or on a sailboat. I am excited to work with the community, and most very flexible on collaboration to contribute to Wikipedia.

From this point of view, succeeding with the managing philosophies delineated for the appropriate measures in assessing contributing new source material, ultimately, I have attached the "edit request" that may be supplementary to the article as the editor considers the suitable in manner. In light of that, and in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help this phase to add the shoot. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest. Accordingly, I have faith in this detail, that with this image (caption included) it will add nicely to the article.

Please take a minute to evaluate, and kindly let me know if you can contribute with this appeal for the addition of trustworthy comprehensive purpose. All being well, if our fellow editors journalistic specialists are pleased with it, and see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to improve the details with the matching image. File:TeamColeman1.jpg . I'm requesting that, when you have finished reviewing the changes, you may add references as appropriate. Preferably, I’d like somebody to review what I’m suggesting, provide reflection, and, once the current is in good shape, move this new material to the live article.

Thank you for your valued consideration, and for all of your help!

Cheers – Paulcoleman (talk) 19:20, 28 June 2018 (UTC)

If a picture of a sailboat is to be used, then the viewer should be able to make out with the unaided eye, the subject upon that sailboat. Any picture where the subject is not clearly seen or see-able within the boundaries of said picture is one which should not be used.  spintendo  19:35, 28 June 2018 (UTC)

Edit request

Dear Fellow Wikipedians,

I am interested in improving this page. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I’m posting here to find another editor to help. As I elucidate here, my research colleagues are asking, respectfully, that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. From this prospective, and following the guiding principles outlined in "Wikipedia:Contact us – Licensing", attached below you may find a photo that may be added to the article in the appropriate manner. Take a look! In this photograph of the yacht, the observer is clearly able to view the subject within the picture of the vessel. In the same way, in this image the focus is plainly perceived, and the observer is capable of clearly viewing the subject within this depiction presented.Kindly note, I have researched in detail the Wikipedia proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material. As such, I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. In addition, I have also posted the required disclosure at the top of the page.

File:TeamColeman1.jpg

Cheers! 148.77.75.34 (talk) 19:44, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

Reply 10-JUL-2018

no No actionable request

 spintendo  03:21, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

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