Talk:Magnolia Way/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:15, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"also known as" If it is unsigned, it really isn't 'also known" by the designation, perhaps just say "officially designated"?
- Done? Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:55, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Clarify somehow that I-22 and US 78 are the same road here.
- Done. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:55, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"announced its plans build a manufacturing" plans to build
- Oops. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:55, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"The manufacturing plant produced its first Toyota Corolla in November 2011,[9] after an economic downturn caused construction to cease from 2008 to 2010.[10]" I think it could be argued that the exact model of car that was first off the line is excessive detail...
- Fixed.
Ref 6 does not prove the highway is unsigned.
- Used Google Street View, which was allowed for DYK too. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:55, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - What you've proven is that there are no MS 780 signs at the termini, which is what you should state, instead of saying there are none at all on the road, which is a much harder ask to prove. Courcelles (talk) 21:06, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    - Fixed again. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:50, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Just not much wrong here. Courcelles (talk) 00:30, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Courcelles: Fixed everything, thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:55, 5 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]