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Needs better English in 'Dharma life' section?

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The first paragraph is fine, but the second appears to be have been written by someone who doesn't have English as their first language. I appreciate their adding material but it is rather confusing, and I don't know enough about the monk's life to edit it without losing valuable context. Of special attention is the use of the word 'so' rather oddly. As far as I can make out 'then' seems to make more sense. With this in mind I will try to improve it. Wokepedian (talk) 12:34, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]