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I really liked reviewing the Bart Simpson article, so I thought I'd have a go at this one, too. Here are some suggestions:
- "In "Lisa the Vegetarian", her increasing sense of moral righteousness regarding her vegetarianism leads her to proselytize, culminating in her disruption of a "meat-based" barbecue prepared by Homer, an act she comes to rue." - I know this isn't simple wikipedia, but I am not sure the average reader would know the meaning of some of these words.
- Okay, I've simplified it.
- The Wind in the Willows needs a season/episode cite
- Actually, the Wind in the Willows is referring to the actual book, not an episode. I added the word novel in front of it.
- including the most recent, The Simpsons Game - time dependent
- Fixed.
- Is there anything more reliable for the awards than the IMDB?
- Yes, but I used IMDB because otherwise I would have to use a commentary or Newsbank, and I have always preferred to use online sources first. I've added a commentary ref.
That's it! Another well written article. :) Nikki311 21:07, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion0422 22:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
- Ok Great. Pass. Nikki311 01:21, 3 November 2008 (UTC)