Talk:Life Is Strange: Before the Storm/GA1
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 23:16, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- "James reveals that the woman they saw him kissing was Rachel's biological mother" - now I'm confused; so does Rachel have a non-biological mother, presumably the woman whom James is cheating on? How does Rachel not know who her biological mother is?
- She was adopted, and this being a story twist, I don't know how to clarify other than specifying with "biological".
- Solved the problem. Cognissonance (talk) 14:48, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- She was adopted, and this being a story twist, I don't know how to clarify other than specifying with "biological".
- "the developer's proprietary StoryForge tools" - what does this mean? As in, what do StoryForge tools do?
- I added the abstract functions of StoryForge, as going too much into detail would be redundant IMO.
- "criticised plotholes" - can you give me an example of a plothole? I think the article could benefit from mentioning one
- Critics avoided spoilers, so quotes like "logic holes big enough to drive Chloe's truck through" only amount to general statements.
- "Most Touching Moment" - can you indicate what this moment was?
- Done.
- "James reveals that the woman they saw him kissing was Rachel's biological mother" - now I'm confused; so does Rachel have a non-biological mother, presumably the woman whom James is cheating on? How does Rachel not know who her biological mother is?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Fantastic work on this article. Looking forward to passing it once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 13:43, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Freikorp: Thank you very much. I've responded to your concerns above. Cognissonance (talk) 14:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- I'm very happy with your changes. Passing this now. Well done. Freikorp (talk) 23:32, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Freikorp: Thank you very much. I've responded to your concerns above. Cognissonance (talk) 14:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail: Fantastic work on this article. Looking forward to passing it once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 13:43, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
