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Does anyone else feel like this article needs a massive rewrite/polishing in terms of the way it's worded? It comes off as if it was written by a non-native English speaker, but I wouldn't even know how to start to approach fixing this page since I'm not familiar enough with the material. TubePowered (talk) 05:17, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@TubePowered: The article was mainly written by me. Indeed, I am a non-native English speaker. What do you think is inappropriate? --Yejianfei (talk) 22:38, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]