Talk:Kismet Healthcare
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[edit]This page is a mess, and I would be willing to bet money that it was written by or for someone working in this company. I am an inexperienced editor and as such, I am requesting feedback for the following rework draft: ____________________________________________
Kismet Healthcare is an Australian healthcare technology company launched in 2023. It is known for its online healthcare directory service, focusing primarily on servicing individuals with disabilities and those utilizing the National Disability Insurance Scheme (NDIS). The company's mission is to simplify the process of accessing healthcare, reduce fraud, and improve overall health outcomes for individuals with disabilities.
"== Funding =="
Kismet Healthcare received US$12.6 million in seed funding led by Prosus Ventures and Airtree Ventures, as well as A$4 million in pre-seed funding from Airtree, Black Nova, and Flying Fox.
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This is a drastic reduction but it seems that not much actual information was lost... I am especially requesting feedback on the sentence "The company's mission is to simplify the process of accessing healthcare, reduce fraud, and improve overall health outcomes for individuals with disabilities." because I am having difficulty imagining a way of writing about the mission of the company in an encyclopedic manner, especially when it is so mind-numbingly generic. The solution may well be to remove it entirely.
Thanks in advance for comment.
additional sources:https://www.kismet.healthcare Arcana enthusiast (talk) 08:57, 8 December 2024 (UTC)