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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: There might be a way to reintroduce that Kropotkin quote as part of a much longer article, but as written it isn't due weight and makes the article come off promotional..

signed, Rosguill talk 05:59, 30 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am fine with removing that quote. The main reason I included it was the great difficulty in locating material relating to Joseph Dallois (whose name is sometimes spelled "Dalloys", due likely to translation issues, and until I realized this fact, it kept me from finding more and better material). I will try to see if I can add some more in later, thanks for the suggestions with editing. Uprisingengineer (talk) 14:58, 30 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]