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Looking good for the most part. Watch the "quote the newspaper" issue and maybe find some better words than "calm". Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:01, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Mendonça was invited to act in pornographic films while he was in São Paulo, and ended up making three of them Remove comma WP:CINS
Although he initially feared the repercussions, Mendonça calmed down after some time. Not terribly idiomatic: try rewording. Can you suggest some alternatives for "calmed" both in lead and in body? Maybe he was unsettled at first? Uneasy with being so visible?
The first of them was made for a minimum wage fee, and the last for one hundred reais Remove unneeded comma.
In one of these films, Maybe split this long sentence?
On 29 June 2018, Mendonça suffered a heart attack and was taken to Planalto Hospital in São Paulo, but died shortly thereafter. Remove comma after Paulo
Check quotes for MOS:LOGICAL, even in sentence fragments.
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