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Good articleI Am the Walrus (American Dad!) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 9, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:I Am the Walrus (American Dad!)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I shall be reviewing the article sometime later. -- Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for taking a while, but I will start the review now. This is how the article fares against the GA criteria;

  1. Well written: Mostly fine, see notes below
  2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Fails at present, see notes below
  3. Broadness in coverage: Passed
  4. Neutral: Passed
  5. Stable: Passed
  6. Images: The one image is fine, right tags used, Passed

Comments

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  • Nine of the references are from the Internet Movie Database. I'm sorry, but in my experience, the IMDb is user-generated, hence not a reliable source. I recommend changing the sources to something more reliable.
  • And YouTube, how is this reliable?
  • In the recption section, I don't like the format of the reviews; all three started with "Reviewer-X from X-site gave the episode a positive review." Try to use a little more variety, like "Reviewer-X from X-site reacted positively.

I will place the article on hold for seven days. Good luck. -- Matthew RD 14:17, 6 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing the comments. I will now pass the article. Well done. Let's hope there would be more American Dad! articles to reach GA. -- Matthew RD 00:48, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The "dancing" scene with the ottoman

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I believe this is a reference to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUa6pcMOLEM

It made the rounds on the internet a few years ago. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.253.185.238 (talk) 12:41, 6 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jeff sees Roger?

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While at the dinner table, Jeff walks in eating a popsicle and Roger is at the table without a disguise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.17.35.35 (talk) 20:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]