Talk:Hurricane Dennis (1999)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 17:02, 29 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this because why not. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 17:02, 29 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Yellow Evan: Any update? It's been over a month. If you don't anticipate having the time to post a full review within the next couple days, I think it would be appropriate to withdraw your claim to it. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 19:01, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Anything about how the storm moved in the lead during its formative stages? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Better?--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Heavy rainfall fell in eastern North Carolina. Although the precipitation was generally beneficial due to drought conditions, it also damaged crops." Mind combining these two sentences? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Over the course of the next two days, the development of a low-level circulation was noted, though a reconnaissance aircraft failed to locate the presence of a surface low on August 23. " link to low pressure area somewhere. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"The system turned towards the northwest and simultaneously slowed in motion by August 27 as a second mid-latitude trough passed to its north. Though wind shear remained unfavorable initially, it began to lessen on August 28 as an anticyclone developed aloft. " link to anticyclone. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"At 12:00 UTC, Dennis was upgraded to a Category 2 hurricane " on what scale? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

The Bristol stool scale. Duh! :P --12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done through MH. Will finish after dinner and the debate. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"The erratic motion of Dennis resulted in several tropical storm watches and warnings, as well as hurricane watches and warning to be issued. A" I don't think you've linked to TC watches and warnings yet. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Storm surge left three towns on Hatteras Island isolated from the rest of the state as an 8 ft (2.4 m) deep channel was created on North Carolina Highway 12." link to storm surge. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Overall, damage in North Carolina and Virginia totaled about $157 million (1999 USD).[nb 1]" considering the note isn't the 1999 USD altogether unnecessary? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 04:44, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Somehow, that's it. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have done everything, @Yellow Evan:. Thanks for finally finishing the review!--12george1 (talk) 19:12, 3 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]