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Reviewer: The leftorium 12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work on the article Hunter! Here's my suggestions:

"How About a Friendly Shrink?" received generally positive mixed reviews – Wouldn't "received mixed to positive reviews" sound better?
lowest rating for an individual Desperate Housewives in series history – "the series' history"? (appears in the Reception section too)
which he won't let Lynette read – "he will not let"
what she's sure is – "she is"
he can't reach – "he cannot"
Gabrielle initially suspects her daughter Juanita + Susan is pleased that her son M.J. – will avoid confusion to people not familiar with the show (like myself)
Angie takes an instant dislike to her son Danny's – same as above
who is in the Leopards, are among the slow group – shouldn't this say "is among"?
seems to understand what he's been through – "he has"
the person she's become – "she has"
Link Wisteria Lane
The episode marked the return of
when her character suffered a nervous breakdown – you can't say "when her character" because Katherine Mayfair is a character
Reeves is the third former –> Leeves
Link "rating" and "share" to Nielsen_ratings#Ratings/share_and_total_viewers
Link You Gotta Get a Gimmick
praised the episode, and said she was – no need for a comma here
Try to avoid repetition of the word "said" in the second and third paragraphs of the reception section
Can you move the quotation box to the left? The image above gets in the way.

Thanks Leftorium! I think I responded to everything. (It should have been "mixed reviews", not "positive mixed".) Let me know if there's anything else! — Hun ter Ka hn 14:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice work! I'll pass the article. The leftorium 14:11, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]