Talk:Hazelwood Park, South Australia
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Census Figures
[edit]Including Tusmore like that, whilst accurate, definetely detracts from the text and makes the article harder to read - for most of my other articles I just put '[suburb name] census area', and with the link in the footnotes giving the complete census area:
eg. Community Profile: Hazelwood Park/Tusmore courtesy ABS and the City of Burnside
It just makes it easier to understand. I won't press it, but if you're intending to go for FA (which I aim for) I'd suggest it being done so. michael talk 09:04, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
I still don't like it but I've changed it for readability. It's just a bit off to claim the suburb has 3000 people when really its population is only half that (approx) ...maelgwntalk 09:43, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
Kaurna
[edit]The Kaurna information is largely duplicated from the Kaurna page, and is not specific to Hazelwood Park in any way beyond the fact that Hazelwood Park is part of the Adelaide Plains. There was a discussion about this on the Mount Osmond, South Australia page, where the consensus was to mention the Kaurna history in the area briefly, plus any dreaming stories relevant to the place. I think discussing burnoff techniques and population counts is a bit irrelevant to this article. --Yeti Hunter (talk) 04:15, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
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