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Good articleGeet Ramayan has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
March 10, 2013Peer reviewReviewed
March 28, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 24, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the 1955–56 Marathi radio programme Geet Ramayan describing the events from an Indian epic Ramayana (central characters pictured) has been translated to eight Indian languages, English, and also transliterated in Braille?
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.
It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".
Yeah. I hadnt removed that intentionally. Anyway, removed now.
  • the television --> television
Done
  • with songs composed by --> and the songs being composed by
Done
  • lyrics and music, including singing --> lyrics, music and singing
Done
  • References should be after punctuation marks.
I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?
Check the first para of the lead.
Done
  • most popular should be quoted.
Done
  • You have already mentioned that Phadke was the composer
Done
  • aired --> being aired
Done
  • chose should be in past tense Sorry, you have used the correct word.
Can you explain this a bit? I didnt get you here.
  • called --> was called
Done
  • Ādhunik Valmiki should be italicised
Done
  • No need to overlink IST
Done. Removed it from the lead
The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.
Done
  • angered Madgulkar readily declined --> which was readily declined by an angered Madgulkar
Done
  • The names of the songs should be italicised
Not per WP:MOS
  • who included --> which included
Done
  • The second para of "Music and singing" section has no references.
Done
  • Describe Nishadraj and the boatmen
Done
  • "He was shown to be distracted at the loss Sita ... confessions of loyalty to Sita (in "Lokasākṣa Shuddhī Jhālī")." - Reference needed.
Done Though songs can be used as a reference for itself.
  • The lead should have some content of the "Characters" section.
Done
  • The last source in the ref section needs fields like publisher and other if possible.
Done

Once these issues are fixed I will pass this article. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed some all of your concerns. Thanks for your review. - Vivvt • (Talk) 03:17, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 03:24, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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