Talk:Fresh Out the Slammer

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 03:54, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 22:15, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"New Zealand, and the US" → "New Zealand, and the United States"

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Swift performed the song live twice on the Eras Tour in 2024" → "In 2024, Swift performed the song live twice on her sixth concert tour, the Eras Tour"

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Swift performed "Fresh Out the Slammer" twice ..." → "In 2024, Swift performed "Fresh Out the Slammer" twice ..."

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Swift performed "Fresh Out the Slammer" twice ..." → Perhaps this source can be added since it directly supports the claim?
"At the concert in Lisbon, Portugal, on May 24, 2024, she performed the song as part of a mashup with "High Infidelity" from Midnights (2022) on piano" → "At the concert in Lisbon, Portugal, on May 24, she performed the song as part of a piano mashup with "High Infidelity" from Midnights (2022)"
"At the concert in Lisbon, Portugal ..." → The Capital source above can also be added here to support the performance's date
"She sang the track again as part of a guitar mashup with "You Are in Love" from 1989 (2014) at the concert in Munich, Germany, on July 27, 2024" → "Swift sang the track again as part of a guitar mashup with "You Are in Love" from 1989 (2014) at the concert in Munich, Germany, on July 27"
"The Great Gatsby" → "The Great Gatsby (1925)"

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Rob Sheffield thought that this part is a reference to The Great Gatsby" → I don't think the source indicate this, the source finds the song stylistically similar to the novel, and then, mentions the song's best line... I think these are two separate things. Maybe we can paraphrase it to "Rob Sheffield found the song's theme and imagery similar to The Great Gatsby (1925)"?

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Fresh Out the Slammer" ends with a coda that has a different tempo than the rest of the song; according to American Songwriter's Alex Hopper, the track separates the two relationships both lyrically and sonically, hinting at how "[Swift] feels about them instantly" → Can we separate the two sentences and also indicate that Hopper is also referencing the melody changes here? Maybe "through its melody changes" instead of "sonically"?
Most of the references need to be archived
Ref 18; subscription access

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 27; Associated Press News → Associated Press

done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:28, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Everything else looks fine for now :) @Ippantekina: I'll put this On hold for now until the issues are fixed or discussed. Medxvo (talk) 22:15, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Medxvo: thanks for the review! I'll get to this asap. One thing is that I can't access IABot. I tried using it twice but it didn't carry. Could you maybe help me with this? Ippantekina (talk) 03:57, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Ippantekina: IABot is currently showing me an "Interface disabled: The maintainers have disabled this interface" message, I'm not sure if this is just for me or is it down? It has been like this for me for 10-11 hours; I have checked multiple times throughout this period. Anyways, I can pass the article once the other issues are addressed since this can be solved anytime and not really a big issue but please make sure to archive them whenever you can :) I'll also try again soon. Medxvo (talk) 14:49, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Medxvo: yeah I had the same problem with IABot, maybe it'll work again in quite some time. Anyways, I've resolved all prose issues :) Let me know if there are outstanding issues that I should address. Ippantekina (talk) 03:37, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I just fixed one or two things but everything looks amazing anyways! I will ✓ Pass the article now. @Ippantekina: Well done and congratulations! Medxvo (talk) 15:31, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]