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" the secondary turrets had 101 mm thick sides" -- needs a convert template.
The same measurement is converted in the previous sentence, and general practice is to convert only once.
"Carnot was laid down in Toulon in July 1891 and launched three years later in July 1894. She was completed another three years after that" -- So...was she sailing around for three years half-finished? Clarify what was still being constructed after launch.
Have a look now, it should be more clear.
Dup link tool returns one result: French battleship Brennus
Fixed, thanks for catching that.
Refs check out, all footnotes check out. ISBNs for older periodicals don't exist of course.
Well...that's about it. Because of the article's small size there isn't a lot to say, though I think given the subject matter it is ample enough for GA. Just holding for minor points and a clarification. —Ed!(talk)23:15, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, these late-19th century ships don't have much written on them, especially if they didn't see action in World War I. Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 23:37, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]