Talk:Dedebit Elementary School airstrike/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:39, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:39, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- Earwig report 18.7%
- Add the abbreviation for internally displaced persons in parentheses in the lead, same for United Nations. Do the same for all organizations for which you want to use the abbreviations for later in the article
- Bombs are dropped, not fired
- Source 26 only supports 108 killed; doesn't mention any injured. Source 27 mentions both. Delete source 26
- Other spot checks supported by the sources
- where it was known drones were being constructed Awkward, rephrase
- Spell out OHCHR on first use--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Failed as non-responsive.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:15, 1 April 2024 (UTC)