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Passed. Vestrian24Bio 09:57, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 03:14, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 05:53, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 05:53, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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@OlifanofmrTennant:

none that I've found Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 07:41, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Vestrian24Bio 10:27, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 13:01, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


  • Add alt text to the infobox image.  Done
  • Add a 3rd paragraph to the lead section, summarizing the critical reception and viewership and also move the next crossover details to it (similar to Invasion! (Arrowverse)).  Done
  • In the 1st paragraph, instead of "analogous universe" use "parallel universe" as its more common and easier for new readers to understand.  Done
  • In the 2nd paragraph, Freedom Fighters: The Ray bit should be re-worded to say that the crossover took place before the series premiere or vice versa.  Done
  • In the part 1 plot,
    • Kara Danvers (Arrowverse) could directly be linked to Kara Danvers.  Done
    • ... Kara injures Overgirl, and Alex and Sara Lance capture Prometheus ... - this sentence should be made a littdle less confusing.  Done
  • In the part 2 plot,
    • Create a link to S.T.A.R. Labs (Arrowverse) on first mention.  Done
    • "Killer Frost (Caitlin Snow)" should be "Killer Frost / Caitlin Snow" or just "Killer Frost" is enough here.  Done
  • In the Cast and characters hatnote, italicize series names.  Done
  • In the cast and characters table,
    • Move the refs 1&2 to the header cell, instead of having them repeated across the table, while ref 3-6 can remain where they are (just an opinion).  Not done
      • Tried something similar and was reverted due to consistancy with the other crossovers.
    • For Frederick Schmidt, I think the second ref is enough.  Done
    • Kara Zor-El could directly be linked to Kara Danvers.  Done
    • What does "non-speaking appearance" and "Co-star" means (Frederick Schmidt's entry) as opposed to Main and Guest.
      • The character is present without any lines
    • Mention "Gideon" is a voice-only appearance.  Done
  • Add a note saying that only the characters appeared as a main role in at least one episode is mentioned in the table, and other guest roles are listed in the bullets. It would resolve the above-said confusion.  Done
  • Add sources to the note about credited characters not appearing.
    • Couldn't find sources for all of them so I reworded it
  • Are column-break necessary here...?
    • Cut
  • Create a link to The Flash season 4#ep92 in Jessica Parker Kennedy's character reveal note.  Done
  • Add a ref to Paul Blackthorne.  Done
  • Add the suffix "episode" to the Critical response section's sub-section headers to avoid duplicate anchors.  Done
  • Keep the main "Arrowverse" navbox visible and move other into {{navboxes}}.  Done

Vestrian24Bio 13:07, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


  • Could add appropriate images to the "Production" sub-sections.  Done
  • The "Marketing" should be a sub-section as well.
  • Mark Pedowitz, then president of The CW,.  Done
  • Can't filming be split into a separate section?
    • No their simply isn't enough content to justify it.
  • Marc Guggenheim should be linked on first mention in the "Development" section.  Done
  • Wendy Mericle should be linked on first mention in the "Writing" section.  Done

Vestrian24Bio 13:39, 16 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: Done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:21, 16 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Vestrian24Bio 08:01, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: Done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 08:48, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Format the last part as following,
== References ==
=== Notes ===
{{notelist}}
=== Citations ===
{{reflist}}
== External links ==
  • Source spot-check: pass

@OlifanofmrTennant: That's all. Vestrian24Bio 09:35, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: Done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 09:47, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 09:56, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final review

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