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The following sentence is confusing.

Army Group E's staff deemed the preceding Distomo massacre and 1 May 1944 Kaisariani executions as excessive and even damaging to the image of the occupational authorities and stressed the need of substituting the collective punishment of civilians with the arrest of insurgents, nevertheless those orders were disregarded and atrocities continued unhindered.

The sentence was changed to read as follows. If this is not the intended meaning, then please correct it. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 01:52, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Army Group E's staff deemed the preceding Distomo massacre and 1 May 1944 Kaisariani executions as excessive and even damaging to the image of the occupational authorities. The staff stressed the need to arrest insurgents rather than resorting to the collective punishment of civilians. Nevertheless, those orders were disregarded and atrocities continued unhindered. Djmaschek (talk) 01:52, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]