Talk:Chamuel (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "and occasional tag team partner Henry" - and with occassional
• "in the vein" - style

Professional wrestling career

• "Chamuel made his professional wrestling début in 2010, as the tag team partner of regular-sized wrestler Henry. The two portrayed a masked, monster/doll duo with Chamuel initially wearing a mask that resembled a ventriloquist's dummy but would later change to an evil clown mask." - these two sentences need to be verified by a reliable source(s) since CageMatch does not mention any of this
• "initially wearing a mask that resembled a" - a mask resembling a
• "On February 21 he defeats" - beat
• "Chamuel capped off 2012" - more formal; ended

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)

• "in an attempt to fool the referee" - deceive
• "The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two" - repetition of the same phrase in the same sentence
• "The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two as part of the CMLL 86th Anniversary Show." - This sentence is duplicated and only one should exist

Independent circuit (2017–present)

• "While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - excess repetition of CMLL in the same sentence
• "While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers," - repetition of working/workers
• "Microman's independent circuit appearances usually see him team with and face off against other CMLL Micro-Estrellas." - think you mean Chamuel's?

Reception

• "and a Cage Side Seats review named the match the "match of the night"" - repetition of the word "match"

References

• Wikilink Agence France-Presse
• The Author of Ref 21 should be formatted as |last= Has Pizzazz |first=Manolo

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 I have addressed all comments except the source mentioned, I will search for one and get it added ASAP. MPJ-DK (talk) 10:34, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Sourced, 100% done I believe MPJ-DK (talk) 17:25, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
    • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 19 August 2020 (UTC)