Hey James! I really liked your article. I would recommend reorganizing it into neat categories, as I’m sure you saw some other students doing as you completed your peer reviews. I also didn’t have mine split up into anything other than paragraphs and I think it will improve the readability of both of our articles a lot. There were some areas throughout the article that could be phrased better and I flagged a few as examples. I think polishing those edges will really improve it as a whole. The information is good, it just needs further revisions. One thing I may recommend adding is examples. A few practical studies that have looked at cancer evolution may be worth adding. I appreciate the opportunity to evaluate your article. Christie ChristieBirdsong (talk) 09:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
