Talk:Berge Meere und Giganten/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:21, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
I have never read any books by Döblin, but would like some day :)
He's great, and there's always something new to find. Sindinero (talk) 08:06, 17 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead should be larger. For example, the section "Genesis and publication" is not summarized in the lead--♫GoP♫_T ^C _N 19:43, 16 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done Sindinero (talk) 08:06, 17 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will continue later

I pretty much enjoyed the prose. Imagine one will read from top to bottom, and then discovers that there is no English translation available to date :P.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Use a consistent style, eg " 790-792" and then "155-7" (you should use the first version, as the latter is misleading)
Done Sindinero (talk) 08:11, 17 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Great article!
Pass/Fail: