Talk:Battle of Kings Mountain/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:31, 26 October 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
One awkward tag to resolve.

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Howard, Ward and Sweeny listed, but not cited. Cite #1 incomplete; date, publisher, etc.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
Link Tryon County and North Carolina on first appearance. What is meant by Carolina Back Country? How did the prisoners escape?

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

All done except for the prisoner question; figuring that out now. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 19:12, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

What I found was that the prisoners were being moved in a long line through wooded areas, and food seemed to be scarce during the march. What I'm not finding is any specific reason for their escape that can be explained easily; it seemed to be gradual over the course of the march. I can try to add something in if you'd prefer, though I don't want to make it overly wordy. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 19:26, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Went and did that, so all issues fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:19, 27 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]