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Here is five interview from the director and main cast -- about.com
Here's an ign set report Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 05:33, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
And, part one and part two of an interview with Carrie Keagan. Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 05:34, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The below are unreliable sources. Do NOT add them to the article. Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 16:32, 2 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here is a list of reviews. Use them in the critical response section. Alex Douglas (talk) 07:49, 21 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
moviehole review: [1] Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 06:03, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
[2], [3], [4] Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 13:02, 2 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Some more unreliable sources: InsidePulse.com - The DVD Lounge Review, eFilmCritic^[1], ReelFilm, ^[2] and DVDTown^[3] Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 16:26, 2 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Additional cast: Keltz's subplot scenes ended up being cut from the film.^[4] Anderson's subplot scenes ended up being cut from the film.^[5]^[4]
Additional cast: Angela Besharah, Sarah Power and Christine Barger play Irene, Densie and Margie, Edgar's, Cooze's and Bobby's love interests, respectively. Robbie Amell plays Nick Anderson, a freshman pledging the Beta House alongside Erik, Cooze and Bobby. Dan Petronijevic, Jordan Prentice and Jaclyn A. Smith reprise their roles from the previous film as Bull, Rock and Jill, respectively. Italia Ricci, Joe Eigo, Sarah Lian, Erica Cox, Rachel Skarsten and Chris Violette have minor parts in the film; two of Violette's three scenes ended up being cut from the film.^[6] Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 14:59, 27 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Moviehole film announcement^[7] Thanks! Alex Douglas (talk) 16:48, 2 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is the reference list

^ Cornelius, David (28 December 2007). "Movie Review - American Pie Presents Beta House". eFilmCritic. Retrieved 3 November 2011. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
^ Nusair, David (17 December 2007). "American Pie Presents Beta House - The American Pie Series Reviews". Reel Film Reviews. Retrieved 3 November 2011. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
^ David Lee, William (24 December 2007). "American Pie Presents: Beta House". DVD Town. Retrieved 24 August 2008. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
^ ^a ^b http://www.hometheaterinfo.com/american_pie_presents_beta_house.htm
^ http://bradfordanderson.net/2007_12_23_archive.html
^ http://afterthepower.blogspot.com/2007/12/chris-violette-in-american-pie-presents.html
^ Weeks, Adam. "New American Pie sequel announced". Moviehole. Archived from the original on 9 April 2007.

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 20:04, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

This has been sitting in the queue for a while, so I'll handle it. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 20:04, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"seven [to] eight weeks" - Why does this need to be quoted? You can just rephrase it yourself.
"While largely overlooked by critics" This appears to be WP:OR - there aren't any sources saying this.
"he hasn't ejaculated for a few months" - "discovering he'd had sex" - Watch for MOS:N'T
"on aspects of writer Lindsay's own life" We can drop the "writer" here; we know he wrote the movie already.
"It was rated R by the Motion Picture Association of America, due to "pervasive strong crude and sexual content, graphic nudity, language and excessive drinking," per WP:FILMRATING you should remove this.
"However, not all reviews were negative. IGN's Hock Teh gave the film 5/10" That doesn't exactly sound positive.

I place this on hold. It's short, but covers what is known about the film. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 21:16, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing the article. I have made the suggested edits. FilmTVComicsNerd (talk) 10:49, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

[eFilmCritic-1] Cornelius, David (28 December 2007). "Movie Review - American Pie Presents Beta House". eFilmCritic. Retrieved 3 November 2011. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)

[ReelFilm-2] Nusair, David (17 December 2007). "American Pie Presents Beta House - The American Pie Series Reviews". Reel Film Reviews. Retrieved 3 November 2011. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)

[DVDTown-3] David Lee, William (24 December 2007). "American Pie Presents: Beta House". DVD Town. Retrieved 24 August 2008. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)

[hometheatreinfo-4] ttp://www.hometheaterinfo.com/american_pie_presents_beta_house.htm

[5] ttp://bradfordanderson.net/2007_12_23_archive.html

[6] ttp://afterthepower.blogspot.com/2007/12/chris-violette-in-american-pie-presents.html

[moviehole-filmannounced-7] Weeks, Adam. "New American Pie sequel announced". Moviehole. Archived from the original on 9 April 2007.

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