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My revert does the following:

  • 1. Puts links to other pages which were removed back in.
  • 2. Puts references which were removed back in.
  • 3. Removed subjective judgements. These included, "a conservative striker", "extreme passion for the game", "Due *to his sharp football skills and dribbling techniques", and "tenacious spirit and kind personality".
  • 4. Removed unreferenced claims such as "his prowess in football is a legacy from Altimond Butler, his father", "Butler’s father has been his motivation for starting a career in football" and "Butler endeavored to become one of the most talented players on the Jamaica Football team",
  • 5. Corrected grammer errors such as 3yrs (three years) and Between1985 (missing space).
  • 6. Clarified vague statements where possible. These include "he participated in the school boys’ football championships." Does that mean that his school team won several football championships? Or "By age 15, he played in the President’s Cup, Minor League and Sid Bartlett League". What are these? And, "he caught the attention of L'Etoile" (is L'Etoile a person or team?)

However, I then went back and added in every new piece of objective information. If I got something wrong, please fix it. Mohrflies (talk) 22:39, 31 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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