Talk:2020 Treviso Open

2020 Treviso Open has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: September 24, 2021. (Reviewed version).

Cue sports Low‑importance

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Cue sports, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of pool, carom billiards and other cue sports on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Cue sportsWikipedia:WikiProject Cue sportsTemplate:WikiProject Cue sportscue sports articles

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WikiProject Cue sports to-do list:

Here are some tasks awaiting attention:

Article requests : Lots of high-priority articles need to be created:

List of wanted articles...

Games: A bunch of high-priority game redlinks, e.g. American four-ball billiards (redirs to Four-ball billiards but not specifically covered there)
"Legends": Edwin Kelly, Charlie Peterson (pool player) (all BCA Hall of Famers); George Franklin Slosson, Maurice Daly (billiards player), Frank Ives, George Butler Sutton [not George H. Sutton, the one with no hands]
Male pool bios: Hsia Hui-kai
Female pool bios:
Male three-cushion bios: Dion Nelin & Jozef Bel Philipoom
Female carom bios: Aygen Berk Saygıner
Aristic pool bios: Nick Nikolaidis, Mark Dimick,Sebastian Giumelli, Eric Yow
Unranked in current pool but notable: Mike Eufemia, Shannon Daulton, Jimmy Reid (pool player) [speed pool champ], var. Mosconi Cup players
Non-player figures: Mitch Laurance, George Fels
Five-pins bios: Gustavo Zito
Organizations: Joss Tour
Events: WPA World Nine-ball Championships (pre-1997), BCA Open Nine-ball Championship, World 14.1 Continuous Championship, International Challenge of Champions (pool)
Media and misc.: Iwan Simonis (leading billiard cloth maker), Joss Cues (major cue mfr.), The Baron and the Kid [Johnny Cash film], Ultimate Pool Party [TV show]
And: everyone/thing listed at WP:CUEGAMES, WP:CUEEVENTS, WP:CUEORGS, WP:CUEBIOS, & WP:CUEMISC. Also a Cue sports world records article (many can be pulled from bio articles like Geet Sethi, Guinness Book will provide others, and so will BCA and other orgs., websites and books like Shamos 1999).
Meta: Outline of cue sports (OoK; cf. [1], etc.) – presently redirects to Cue sports, but this is not an OoK page.
Internal pages: Something like: [2][3]). Such pages are not fluff, but can be good places to find recruits for the project, possibly including subject-matter experts, especially if cross-referenced to the project. Also, Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Cue sports (cf. [4][5][6]).

Cleanup : Thomas Engert, Marlon Manalo
Copyedit : Jonni Fulcher
Expand : Cue sports techniques#Carom shots (section needs to exist), Straight pool, Alfredo de Oro,Jeanette Lee (pool player)
NPOV : Andy Segal (major WP:COI and WP:V issues, too), Jose Parica (it's bad!); Efren Reyes, Thomas Engert, Dennis Orcollo, Dick Jaspers
Photo : Category:Wikipedia requested photographs of cue sports and Category:Wikipedia requested photographs of cue sports people
Split : List of World Eight-ball Champions - blackball stuff needs own article {draft split from real eight-ball one (draft).
Stubs : loads of players in Category:Cue sports stubs
Update : Arcade game (link to bagatelle, bar billiards, etc.)
Verify : Cue stick (mostly WP:OR!), Frank Taberski (has major fact conflict between BCA & NYT sourcing), Russian pyramid, add sources to Unreferenced BLPs
Wikify : Chicago (pool), Jonni Fulcher
Other :
- Create timelines, both textual and graphical. See link for various guidelines and examples. We need an overall one for cue sports generally, and more specific ones as we drill down into more specific topics (timeline of nine-ball, timeline of Willie Mosconi's career, etc.).
- Form sections: Exhibition game needs section on cue sports; could later form a new article with "Main article..." xref to it. What other general articles need cue sports sections?
- CopyVio rewrite:
- Clarify: What is the "continuous pool" listed above "14.1 continuous" at Alfredo DeOro?
- Delete or defend:
- Move/Rename (and Redirect):
- Redirect:
- Unorphan:
- Ensure: that rules discussions in game articles & the Billiard techniques article do not violate WP:NOT#IINFO.
- Help fix: WP:CUEBIOS#Pool players (women) is nearly empty!
- Help develop: the lists of WP:CUEORGS and WP:CUEEVENTS
- Images: improve articles with images from commons; create pics and add them to commons as GFDL/CC-by/PD.
- Add: {{Sport overview}} to main articles of cue games that are real sports; medal table tags where they apply (see Ding Junhui for example).
- Insert: Cue sports events (tournament results, etc.) into the "year in sports" categories (e.g. 1965 in sports), using {{subst:Cue sports heading}} if that year doesn't have one yet.
- Change:
- Replace:
- Some day: Seek Featured Topic status.
- Plunder: the French article; it does have some interesting tidbits, structure and images. Check out de.wikipedia, etc., as well.
- Inter-wiki: Improve simple:Billiards and foreign-language key articles.

See also: Snooker to-do list

Note: To watchlist this to-do list, click on "watch" at top right of this table. Watching the page it is transcluded on won't watch the to-do list.

Italy Low‑importance

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2020 Treviso Open/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking a look at this! — Ghost River 18:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

Comma after "The event had a total prize pool of €38,000"
Comma after "The men's event was won by Jayson Shaw"
Switch the first two sentences of the second paragraph for better flow (e.g. defending champion eliminated → new winner)
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tournament format

Why is the name of the hotel italicized here?
Specify in this section that it's nine-ball pool, which is mentioned in the lede but not in the body
Not a fan of the semi-colon after "double-elimination tournament", as the second half is not actually an independent clause.
Move "7–5" to after "Marharyta Fefilava" rather than at the end of the sentence, for better clarity
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Prize fund

"both of the winners of the event" → "the winner of each event"; otherwise it could be read that there were two winners per event
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tournament summary

Is it "losers round" or "loser's round"? Both are used at different points
Comma after "Oliwia Zalewska"
Remove comma after "completed two 7–6 victories"
"defeated" used twice in the sentence beginning "Having defeated Bojana Sarac" and is used again in the next sentence. Should use a synonym to break up flow
Per MOS:CAPTION, since it's a complete sentence, the caption should end with a period
No comma needed after "Ouschan won the final"
Hyphen to en dash in the last sentence
- all done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Results

Why is one a "competition" and the other is an "event"?
- fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

Work needed in reference [2]
Sometimes a publisher is given for epbf.com, sometimes not
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:27, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

No stability concerns within the revision history
One photo, relevant and properly licensed
Per MOS:IMAGELOCATION, the photo used should probably be on the right side
- I was working on It is often preferable to place images of people so that they "look" toward the text, but do not achieve this by reversing the image, which creates a false presentation, which is why it's on the left, but I can't say I care either way. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:26, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Earwig score looks great at 2.9%

That's all I have! Ping me if you have any questions. — Ghost River 19:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All done GhostRiver. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:31, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me, thanks! — Ghost River 13:42, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]