Draft:Gates of Moses peace be upon him

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Moses peace be upon him during the time of Exodus, went on several journeys; the first to the far west, the second to the far east; the third he went to the Darial gorge, to build these large gates of iron. Moses peace be upon showed China how to make iron, he also communicated with the native Americans; and to them showed the Torah and gave them good laws. During the forty years of wandering, Moses peace be upon him; went to the area between the Euxine sea and the Caspian sea, there he raised his hands by the will and Mercy of ALLAH there was made gates of iron. This was to prevent gog and magog from invading these people of Pontus this was during the end of the bronze age. The person Khidr peace be upon him was a figure mentioned in the Quran, he was said to wear green; some armor, he also was known throughout the land. This person was Ulysses, he at one time had a meeting with Moses peace be upon him, the infant Joshua peace be upon him; they went into Tyre and they found something that allowed them to make iron, and they parted ways. Subsequently the people of Bani Isra`il were given the knowledge of iron work, and made iron armor; then they returned to their land of Tyre. The people of Bani Isra`il, with the guidance of ALLAH, the iron armor, and the Ark of the Covenant established an empire. The Trojan war was started by daedalus the king of Cyprus, he wanted power; so he ordered jason and the argonauts, and journey to the caucasus mountains. They released the giant prometheus that created the Euxine sea and Australia, subsequently agamemnon the pharoah went to war against Tyre; for ten years there was some plagues and events of the Bible. The son of agamemnon was orestes, that was king og; and ALLAH destroyed that mountain of a giant, the Dorians being defeated by Bani Isra`il returned to their land of the Peloponnese, and they alleged they discovered iron, but in reality they were defeated by iron. Subsequently there was speculation from the Greeks, and people of India, and people of China; about this iron, but it was first given to them by Moses peace be upon him. There is other accounts of Khosrow, the King of Persia who built great things, wherefore built an arch, the man of two times the bronze age and the iron age; wherefore that person who in jurisprudence ruled Persia, build things to prior constructions. The collosi of memnon, that is two giants who ruled Egypt during end of the bronze age; wherefore the account of Homer is to say references to events of Exodus, subsequent generations were the inheritors of the earth; with their wandering became a nation and the Promise of ALLAH. The righteous people speak justice, and truth of morality.

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https://quran.com/en/al-kahf Pliny the Elder 1001 nights speaks of this the Quran the Bible the iron age China steel