Wikipedia talk:Wikipedia Signpost/2008-01-28/In the news

Is this sentence unnecessarily hard to understand?

"Jimmy Wales backs a declaration to disrupt educational materials as open source software has disrupted proprietary software by introducing a process to help open-content material, while realising the difficulties that lie ahead."

AnonMoos (talk) 21:04, 29 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed - I had to read it twice to unpick it - the first time I read it I presumed that there was a typo and it should be "Wales backs a declaration to distribute educational materials". I have changed it to hopefully make more sense. SFC9394 (talk) 21:15, 29 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]