Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 18, 2024
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[edit]- Pinging @JennyOz; RP made some edits and I did a partial revert, but I'm sure you've got a firmer grasp on the issues here than I do. - Dank (push to talk) 23:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- Hi both, it reads well enough to me, ie, nothing jumps out that might be reported at Errors. (I'm still beside myself with connection outage and having to use alternative online opportunities. I have a firm grasp on nothing!)
- The Mercury program itself isn't linked but would that be overkill? Mercury Seven is the group article and Friendship 7 mission links to the Mercury-Atlas 6 flight.
- Perhaps at "the only person to fly in both the Mercury and Space Shuttle programs." we could pipe a link at "Mercury" to Project Mercury
- ie "both the Mercury and Space Shuttle programs."
- Is that any better or have I lost the plot? JennyOz (talk) 13:53, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry to hear about your connection problems, let me know when it gets sorted! - Dank (push to talk) 14:06, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
- Happy to add the link ... changed it to "both Project Mercury and the Space Shuttle program". Does that work for both of you? - Dank (push to talk) 16:19, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
- Elegant solution, thanks Dank. JennyOz (talk) 01:10, 15 July 2024 (UTC)