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Rahul Gandhi

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I've listed this article for peer review because...Though I have tried to improve the article recently, not much information is available about the living person. I need to know more about what can be added / removed to avoid future GA failure. I welcome all inputs. Thank you.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 06:06, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Zetana

Here's some quick observations I noted on a skim, to start off. Zetana (talk) 07:48, 7 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gandhi was adamant on creating a professional career before joining politics. I don't see a citation for this claim
Gandhi has been a strong proponent of harnessing the scale and dexterity that technology can lend while amplifying the power of citizens. This sentence reads as promotionalism, I don't quite understand if it's necessary. If it's to describe what Gandhi did while in the private sector, it needs a citation
I think the image with Hillary Clinton should be removed, as the other one is from the same year, and seems like it's more relevant to what Gandhi does (natl. politics, rather than intl.)
The "Farmers' and Land Agitation" section is a bit unclear to me, what's the importance of this? And what is it about? There's a lot of information here about what appears to be just a series of comments over a few months, and seems like it should be merged into the "Political career" section instead.
A strong advocate of women's rights and empowerment... The citation doesn't seem to support the "strong advocate" claim

This is all I have for now, more to come in a few days as I continue to read it over. Zetana (talk) 07:48, 7 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Mostly I think the article could use some prose work but I will address that later. I don't think the article is missing anything important, just curious if there's any additional information you've found about Gandhi's political stances. Mitch McConnell, for example, has a lot of content about his political beliefs, both in Mitch McConnell § Political positions and in a sub-article Political positions of Mitch McConnell. It's a bit long/overweighted in McConnell's case (especially because he's a senior political figure), but perhaps there's stuff about what Gandhi thinks about the economy, foreign policy (beyond just national security), health, etc. other hot-button issues in India... have you seen anything about that? Zetana (talk) 04:24, 10 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@25 Cents FC: to ensure they saw the above comments. Are you still interested in editing this article? Z1720 (talk) 16:27, 26 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing this PR due to inactivity. An editor can open a new PR once the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 15:40, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]