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Michael Biggs (singer)

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I came across this article when it was the subject of an AfD for a supposed lack of notability, as well as being badly written. As I am Brazilian and would be able to read the Portuguese-language sources, I took it as a fun exercise to try to bring this article about a forgotten former child star up to Wikipedia standards, adding sources, formatting and copy-editing. I now believe it qualifies for C or B-class status, but would like your feedback as to what is appropriate and what could be improved upon (or whether it even meets the criteria for either of these).

Thanks for the atention, CVDX (talk) 23:17, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from brachy08

hello, cvdx. congratulations on saving this article from getting afd’d. personally, i feel that this article can reach c class, not sure about b tho. i feel that the article definitely improved from its initial state. if you want to, you can jump straight into nominating it for ga status. but if you fell like this article has a long way to go, try to find as many sources as possible (if you are not sure what is reliable or not, this should help a bit, but it is best to use wp:rsp brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 05:06, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As a GA reviewer which has two other GA's, the article does not seem to be anywhere close to GA, probably going to result in a quick fail. I'm going to add my own comments to this really tiny article and see if the article is eligible enough for GA. Thanks, 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 02:46, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TheNuggeteer

This subject seems not notable, with him being the singer of a band and having a criminal dad, does he have notability by himself? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 03:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Things you need to resolve:

Make the lead longer, add more about his dad, his career, and his life.
There is more information about Michael appearing on television to defend his dad, you can add it with the header "Early career".
Make the header for him being a part of the band "Turma do Balão Mágico", since that was the name of his band.
There's more information about him in the band in source 3, you can add that to make the article longer.
In source 3, there's information about after the band broke up, you can add that in a section named "Break-up".
You can name the section after Break-up "Aftermath".
You can add his discography.

Here's my review. Sure, it's a lot to work on, but I'll be happy to help if you need it. I will review the page more later. Thanks, 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 03:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]