Wikipedia:Peer review/Marlon Coleman/archive1

Marlon Coleman

I've listed this article for peer review because...
I would like to get this article to GA status, I have asked around WikiProject Oklahoma for assistance, I thought that it may help ask for a peer review as well.
I am new to Wikipedia and this is the first article I have created, so I would like to take this as a learning opportunity to see what I could do to make this article better.
Main Objectives of this Peer Review

• Ensuring compliance with all Wikipedia guidelines and policies
• Article meets Wikipedia writing style guidelines
• Determining the article's path to Good Article Status

Thanks, Trey Wainman (talk) 22:40, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• "Non-primary source needed" tags should be resolved. Additional sources can be found in WP:LIBRARY, Google, or your local library system.
• The lede is quite short. I suggest expanding it to cover all major topics in the article.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:14, 26 August 2023 (UTC)