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Hi, i've listed this article for peer review becuase I think it has the potential to become a featured list, and I'm willing to work on any errors and fix up anything that needs fixing to bring it up to featured status.
Thanks, Superflewis (talk) 03:29, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments - this can make it to FL but only with some considerable work. Here are my suggestions.
- References should be placed immediately following punctuation where possible, per WP:CITE.
- Typos aplenty so run a spell checker over it. E.g. "conjuction", "reeives".
- What's a CV?
removed - I used similar wording to that in the official website --Superflewis(talk) 10:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Just checking, is "recognizes " Australian English or should it be "recognises"?
- 'Recognize' is the standard spelling - this is deduced tby the fact that it has over 100 Million hits on google, compared to 'recognises' with 20 million.
- "prestigious title " this is POV.
- 5000 ->5,000.
- Can you explain how you personally feel able to release Image:Jesaulenko1.jpg under CC?
- I found it in flickr which is general CC 2.0 providing you quote the author. Maybe in this case just to be safe we should relist it as {non-free historic image}?
- Explain AFL before using the acronym (i.e. put (AFL) after the first use).
- Same with VFL.
- Portrait images should use the
upright
parameter per WP:MOS#Images.
- Why is "AFL Mark of the Year Winners" under the main section heading?
- "Selection Process" should be "Selection process" per WP:HEAD.
- That section needs some work - too many really short paragraphs. Merge and improve the flow.
- Winner short sort by surname - use the {{sortname}} template.
- Note and Video cols do not need to be sortable.
- You need to identify still active players and goal of the year winners with something in addition to colours per WP:MOS#COLORS - e.g. an asterisk or a dagger.
- "1 handed screamer " far too POV - plus should be one-handed.
- Trivia sections are discouraged. Work on adding this information, where pertinent, into the rest of the article.
- References need
publisher
andtitle
andaccessdate
where missing.
How about the youtube links?