User talk:LakesideMiners/Archives/2024/June
IM BEING REALLY CONSTRUCTIVE
[edit]FRICK YOU 85.31.142.146 (talk) 12:59, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALSO I'M FREAKING REALLY POLITE FUDGE YOU FRICKING POOHEAD 85.31.142.146 (talk) 13:03, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
Responsive Wikipedia page
[edit]Hello,
Can I ask why you reverted the Responsive Wikipedia page back? Were there certain objectionable sections? Giraffeinreverse (talk) 23:56, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Responsive page
[edit]Hello,
I understand that the updates may be too promotional. Can you offer specific sections? Giraffeinreverse (talk) 00:09, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm writing a reply right now. Give me a few minutes. LakesideMinersCome Talk To Me! 00:10, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- No worries. I might not reply until tomorrow. Thanks! Giraffeinreverse (talk) 00:22, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Alright, for a few examples.
- Phrases like "with a vision" are what are known as peacock phrases. These are words/phrases that attempt to make something seem more important then it is.
- "Responsive integrates with more than 20 business applications, including Slack, Salesforce, Hubspot, Microsoft Office, Seismic, etc. Customers can customize their integrations with Responsive’s 75 open APIs." reads like a sales pitch to insiders.
- That as well as the Platform, Culture, the list of its awards(unless notable) as well as its grow figures don' t really belong per WP:PROMOTION
- It mostly all reads as something you would find on a company website or in a recruitment video. LakesideMinersCome Talk To Me! 00:57, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- No worries. I might not reply until tomorrow. Thanks! Giraffeinreverse (talk) 00:22, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Responsive page
[edit]Okay. Thank you. Giraffeinreverse (talk) 16:12, 18 June 2024 (UTC)