User talk:Disha08/sandbox

Article Evaluation

The Article on Hindu Temple is very fascinating article for me. I really like the information on that topic but I fell like the opening position has to be little more interesting then it is. I found some articles that gave me information about how divine it is to be in the temple? and how it feels? From my point of view reader should know how divine it feels when you are in the temple. so my suggestion is that those information should add in oping portion of the page. when I read the discussion on this article I also feel that we need to improve many thing in the article. one of the question was, can we call temples mandir? so, from my point of view I think we can because the proper word for temple is mandir but then we have to explain readers why do we call it mandir?

Disha08 (talk) 19:01, 21 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Disha's Peer Review

You have many good ideas on how to improve the weaker sections of the actual article, as well as good sources that will give credibility to the information that you will be adding to the article. However, I think that you just need to create the edits on your own sandbox. I would suggest copying the sections from the article onto your sandbox and editing it there, before moving on to the real one. Also, I think it is great that you will be helping the reader understand the difference between Moksha and Nirvana, I do not believe that the two are compared very often and it would be good to have that information be available to the public. So, just make sure to actually create the edits, preferably on a rough draft (your sandbox) before publishing them on the article. Ar92597 (talk) 03:12, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

thank you!