User talk:Cshutti
To avoid having the content be "overly promotional", you should brutally excise phrases like "snacks with healthy ingredients that made you feel great" and "they began to notice how energetic and alive they felt" and "a brand they could be proud of" and "natural goodness" (among others). You may find it useful to read our guidelines on "peacock" terminology. DS (talk) 13:56, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
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Your article submission Gourmet Raw
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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 23:23, 4 October 2013 (UTC)