User:Josemags
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Here is my hot link and comment for the page homologous Chromosomes http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Talk:Homologous_chromosome
"There seems to be a lot missing in terms of the origin of homologous chromosomes as well as their normal function. This is more like an expanded definition with out any application. I would advise to add in more sections outlining homologous chromosomes' effects during different portions of the life cycle. Such as including portions of this article http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3594255/ that describes Homologous Chromosomes movement and action during G0 phase in human cells. Josemags (talk) 00:15, 7 October 2013 (UTC)"
Here is my hot link and comment for the page Mesoderm http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Talk:Mesoderm
"I think the article overall is missing important sections describing the mesodermal layer in active organisms. Perhaps including references to articles such as this http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/24088538 would better expand on the formation regulation of mesodermal organs. I feel like something as important is the mesodermal layer deserves more than 6 sections outlining its entire importance."