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Jazz Age

  • This is less an article about the Jazz Age itself, and more about the entire genre of jazz.
  • It is not very detailed about the Jazz Age's exact time period, simply stating that it was a period of time in the 1920s.
  • The section on 'Origins of Jazz' shouldn't be in an article about the Jazz Age, but rather in an article about jazz itself.
  • Altogether, the section headings do not work. Instead of describing the content contained within them, they are too broad, containing titles such as 'Youth' or 'Radio'.

Tourist attraction

  • The article introduction does not contain an in-depth summary -- instead, it simply contains two general sentences similar to those that one could find in a dictionary.
  • As with the Jazz Age article, this simply does not give relevant information to someone wanting to learn about tourist attractions in general.
  • This article would need to be entirely rewritten.

Articles I'd Like to Edit

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