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Good Articles Vs. Articles that Need Improvement

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  • Copyedit "History" section
  • Not sure the Muhammed Ali section is relevant to the trash-talk wiki page
  • Copyedit "How it is Used"
  • Smack-talk section is fairly long for it being there to discern the difference between the two terms

Articles to Improve Selections

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  1. Grocery Store
  2. Lead Belly
  3. Concert

Tasks for Articles/Major Issues

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Grocery Store

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  • Some sections are very large and need to be trimmed down or separated into subsections
  • Companies section can be deleted entirely
  • Prices subsection should be connected back to Grocery Store purpose or deleted
  • Many sentences need revision for readability toward nontechnical audiences
  • Grammatical errors present with comma functions and semi/colon functions
  • Citations need to be the same throughout
  • Missing citations need to be added or info should be deleted

Lead Belly

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  • Some of the headings are formatting differently from other headings
  • Section should be added about Lead Belly's criminal record (he has murdered/attempted to murder multiple people, but this information is glazed over)
  • Legacy section should be reformatted as a bulleted list
  • Sentences need revision for nontechnical audiences
  • Grammatical errors are present
  • Citations need to be the same throughout
  • Missing citations need to be added or info should be deleted