Template:Did you know nominations/Serene Velocity

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:18, 11 October 2017 (UTC)

Serene Velocity

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~~... that Serene Velocity, a film of a basement hallway, was inducted into the U.S. National Film Registry?~~ Source: "In 2001, the United States Library of Congress deemed the film 'culturally significant' and named it to the National Film Registry." ([1])

5x expanded by Hinnk (talk). Self-nominated at 04:25, 17 September 2017 (UTC).

5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline – however, I think you have a better hook here:
ALT1: ... that after viewing footage from his 1970 film Serene Velocity, director Ernie Gehr felt nauseated?
The paragraph under Description needs at least one cite, per Rule D2. Since the nominator has many DYK credits, a QPQ is needed here. Yoninah (talk) 15:08, 17 September 2017 (UTC)

Hinnk, added a citation needed tag. Once you provide a citation and QPQ, you're good to go. --Usernameunique (talk) 11:02, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

QPQ is Cerebratulus lacteus. ALT1 definitely works, I would just change nauseous → nauseated (I corrected this in the article too). The "Description" section began without any secondary sources as a "plot description", but it clearly grew beyond that; I can cite it later this week once I dig up my original notes. hinnk (talk) 03:49, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Citations added now. hinnk (talk) 06:46, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Issues are addressed, so approving ALT1. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:11, 9 October 2017 (UTC)