Template:Did you know nominations/Ratih Hardjono
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:23, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
Ratih Hardjono
[edit]- ... that Ratih Hardjono connected her wedding with corruption, collusion, and nepotism?
- ALT1:... that former Indonesian State Secretary Ratih Hardjono helped build the first civilian presidential office in 35 years?
Created/expanded by Rosiestep (talk), Crisco 1492 (talk). Nominated by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 06:01, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Harry Powers
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Citation of the hook: I am uncertain as to the suitability of the source used to cite the hook. It seems to be a puff-piece published on the website of a political organisation that I suspect might not be independent of the subject. Having another source would be great. I have given the article a light copyedit, and it is otherwise good to go. --Ohconfucius ¡digame! 09:20, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hmm, we could go with ALT2 ... that former Indonesian State Secretary Ratih Hardjono was accused of being a spy prior to her resignation?, but that may be a little negative. This seems to use her as an example of Wahid's commitment to the freedom of the press. I'll see if I can get another source for
the original orALT1 later, if I'm not pressed for time. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:39, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- Otherwise, the original may be good enough. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:41, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'd like some feedback on the quality of this source, which also supports ALT1. This looks a bit more reliable (look at the "Panelists" tab) Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:11, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- From experience and gut feel, bios like that one in ozmate are rarely properly fact-checked. They are often supplied by the subject. It seems that the factoid you need to cite should be easy enough to source, and I am surprised at the apparent difficulty in finding one that states that assertion unequivocally. ABC is generally considered reliable, though, and adequate for our purposes.
- Hmm, we could go with ALT2 ... that former Indonesian State Secretary Ratih Hardjono was accused of being a spy prior to her resignation?, but that may be a little negative. This seems to use her as an example of Wahid's commitment to the freedom of the press. I'll see if I can get another source for
Good to go. --Ohconfucius ¡digame! 03:23, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks OhC. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:31, 18 October 2011 (UTC)