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Peachtree 25th Building fire

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~~... that during a 1989 high-rise fire in Atlanta, one woman jumped from the sixth floor of a building, falling 60 feet (18 m), though ultimately survived?~~

Source: The Atlanta Journal-Constitution

ALT1: ... that several members of Atlanta's fire department have said that multiple deaths could have been avoided in the Peachtree 25th Building fire if the building had had a fire sprinkler system? Source: United Press International
ALT2 ... that a woman survived falling 60 feet (18 m) after jumping from the sixth floor of a building during a 1989 high-rise fire? Source: The Atlanta Journal-Constitution
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Floor Frame

Created by JJonahJackalope (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 68 past nominations.

JJonahJackalope (talk) 13:10, 19 February 2025 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - See below

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting: - See below

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Very well written new article! After going through at each requirement, virtually everything passes 🙂 I have two small concerns, however, before approving the hook. First, copyvio flagged the phrase "suffering from smoke inhalation and other injuries" as being taken straight from the source. I would rephrase this just a little as seven words is a little long to be used without quotation marks (which you otherwise do very well with). Second, your ALT0, which I have a personal preference towards, is a little hard to read with all the commas. What do you think of the proposed ALT2 I've added as an alternative? Once these are addressed we should be good to go. As a member of WikiProject Firefighting, I want to thank you for your contributions to firefighting on the encyclopedia. Cheers! Johnson524 09:50, 21 February 2025 (UTC)

@Johnson524:, thank you for reviewing this DYK! I just wanted to ping you to let you know that I made an edit to the article to remove the copyvio issue. Additionally, I made a slight edit to your ALT2 (removed a stray "the"), but otherwise, I like it! -JJonahJackalope (talk) 21:20, 21 February 2025 (UTC)

@JJonahJackalope:

Approved ALT2 and ALT1, cheers! Johnson524 21:43, 21 February 2025 (UTC)