Template:Did you know nominations/Gil Cisneros
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:19, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
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Gil Cisneros
[edit]- ... that Gil Cisneros won a USD$260 million Mega Millions jackpot?
- ALT1:... that after he won a USD$260 million Mega Millions jackpot, Gil Cisneros became a philanthropist?
- ALT2:... that after he won a USD$260 million Mega Millions jackpot, Gil Cisneros created a foundation to aid Latinos receive their educations?
- ALT1:... that after he won a USD$260 million Mega Millions jackpot, Gil Cisneros became a philanthropist?
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IOUTemplate:Did you know nominations/Shmerke Kaczerginski - Comment: Trying to stay away from his political candidacy in the 2018 elections in the hooks. Is that a mistake?
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Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 16:38, 13 June 2018 (UTC).
It’s very close, but needs cleanup- Length is good, over 1900 characters.
- New enough, expanded froma redirect on date indicated
- Refs look impeccable
- there are some minor cleanup issues that can easily be fixed, grammar and sentence structure are awkward or wrong in a few places
- I strongly prefer the second hook over the other two, it’s very compelling
- Beeblebrox (talk) 20:26, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Beeblebrox: Over the weekend, I did some clean up, finding a few places where I did mess up in the initial writing. Please let me know if there are any other problems I missed. QPQ is provided too. And I agree with preferring ALT1 after considering it for a time. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:49, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for reminding me, looks good .Beeblebrox (talk) 18:32, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for reminding me,
- @Beeblebrox: Over the weekend, I did some clean up, finding a few places where I did mess up in the initial writing. Please let me know if there are any other problems I missed. QPQ is provided too. And I agree with preferring ALT1 after considering it for a time. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:49, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
